Special Project: Interaction with ENG 099

First, find from the following list the ENG 99 students you will be giving feedback to in this interaction (you each have two). ENG 99 names are on the left of the list, the ENG 101 editors are on the right of the list.

ENG 99 student and ENG 101 Editors


Akbarova Feruza : Josh and Jared

Almonte Gabriel : Samantha and Anna

Casimir Tina : Chris and Jayleen

Cruz Stephany: Carlos and Chasidy

Delgado Cindy : Magaly and Melvin

Flores Ana Karen:  Jhani and Elena

Hernandez Diana : Shannon and David R

Hossain Lipi: Okorie and Marlita

Ibrahim Hanan: Jared and Lismilda

Jiang Boyang : Anna and Luisa

Karim Stephan : Victor and David S

Lai, Siu Ming : Eddy and Victor

Lopez Felix: David S and Marlita

Martinez Franklin:  Jayleen and Okorie

Mauricio Richelle : Chasidy and Shannon

MD Mohammed: Melvin and Jhanu


Patel Harsh : Elena and Magaly

Ramirez Elvin:  Carlos and Eddy

Vargas Maria : David R and Chris

Yoo Joon Kil : Lismilda and Samantha

Zhang Ting Shi : Luisa and Josh

Then go to http://heroicchoices.blogspot.com and from the "blog roll" to the right click on the student for whom you are an editor.  The assignment you are looking at is blog #4. They had to write a summary of the allegory of the cave using the following guidelines:

State the main idea (thesis) of the text accurately and clearly
State the supporting ideas accurately and clearly
Omit secondary details (all or almost all)
Follow the order of the original
Be written in your own words--no plagiarism but without opinion

Written in Standard Edited English

Write a couple of paragraphs giving your feedback to the other student. Introduce yourself, tell them what you think works in their essay, and then make suggestions for editing. Talk about content first, then grammar. Finish by inviting them to look at your blog, and give them your blog address as a link. Post the paragraphs as a comment to their blog post, and you are done. Please remember to be courteous to the other students.